Need Landing Page Rewritten

I am about to promote an eBook that help average adults to succeed in starting a home based business. My difference is that I am actually an established web development and SEO company that has developed the program and will help people hands on. There is an image attached that will show you the url of a similar company that is promoting a system for people to start their own business too. Those people are really promoting a system that will eventually help members start an MLM business with them. I do have an MLM company that my system is designed to help succeed at, just the same. I will provide more details to the winning bid. Must Be. Quality. Professional. and Engaged It will be editing what you see those folks have done.