EDIT A VIDEO FOR KICKSTARTER

WE HAVE AN ALLREADY RECORDED AND EDITED VIDEO FOR KICKSTARTER, BUT WE NEED TO EDIT IT AGAIN TO MAKE IT SHORTER AND MORE INFORMATIVE AND MORE ATTRACTIVE. IT'S NOT AN EXPLAINER VIDEO, IT'S A KICKSTARTER PROMO VIDEO / FILM :) Feel free to add text and animations where needed. Feel free to shorten video. the goal is getting the main message accross. It's a video for a drums manufacturer, BONE DRUMS. Attached are the current video, the script (text) and the voice over. It is a bit too long and doesn't communicate the point of the Kickstarter campaign well enough. We need to communicate the following parts (not neccessarily in these exact words, but the message should be like this: WE ARE A SUCCESSFUL HIGH-END DRUM SET MANUFACTURER BONE DRUMS ALL THESE DRUMMERS ALLREADY SUPPORT US (list drummers and bands, mentioned in the original video) WE'VE ALLREADY BEEN HELPING DRUMMERS WITH HIGH-QUALITY DRUMS, AND NOW WE'VE MADE A LEAP IN TECHNOLOGY WITH MAKING DRUMS LIGHTER AND BETTER - AND WE ARE INVITING YOU TO BE A PART OF IT: INTRODUCING THE NEW CARBON FIBRE AND WOOD LINE OF PRODUCTS ---The rest you can re-mix (edit) any way, but this message needs to be clear Our current files exceed 1GB and can not be uploaded here, so we will forward a link upon starting cooperation here: [login to view URL] (files should be uploaded within the next 30 mins) The current video can be found here: [login to view URL]