please strengthen every parts of my essay (1800 words) which is about Apple Inc, especially introduction and conclusion. please check my grammar and [url removed, login to view] make the sentence more formal. please make my essay more active, not boring. Please make it as better as you can. NB: total number not above 2000.
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I would be very pleased to assist you with your project. Please see PMB for more information about me. I will look forward to hearing from you. With thanks, Dvorah12 (D'vorah Elias)