Tableau de clarification publique

  • RhapsodeMonolith
    Titulaire du concours
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    Congrats, you entry wins.
    We'll use your story in our project.
    We'll discuss about changes later, but some initial points for you start thinking:
    - there is a problem about "time". I mean, you mention the time has frozzen, but later you write "there are X minutes left"
    - the story must be more extensive. You could add details in the next sections:
    --> since Petrov and the 2 mens appears in the forest until they reach the sequoia tree
    --> when the two mens convice Petrov to accept
    --> when Petrov backs to the bunker

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    1. ZainabM2
      ZainabM2
      • il y a 1 an

      yes I realise the mistake I made.. I'll make the changes and submit it.

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  • ZainabM2
    ZainabM2
    • il y a 1 an

    Thanks for selecting my entry!

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  • RhapsodeMonolith
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 1 an

    Hello.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Good idea. I like some parts.
    Let's works in the other parts if yours story wins.

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