Freelancer :
aaronlowcy
About us-Heyl Homes
As with most of my writing tasks, I believe in offering comments to explain my writing if time permits. Please find them on the side. I have used most of the previous content and rewritten the text for clarity and conciseness, while altering the headings and some parts, and including a final tagline to showcase your desired value proposition of being a luxury homebuilder and helping customers to remember your company more easily. Hope you like it. Aaron