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Hello, how are you sending the proposal, try to improve the points you told me, I hope I have achieved it, I remain aware of your feedback, thanks.

Proposition n°16 du concours                                                 Low level human illustration - portrait for a game
Proposition n°16

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  • kubatp
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 5 ans

    Maybe also the right hand looks a bit weird. I understand that it is fist but the different length of eac figer looks strange:)

    • il y a 5 ans
  • kubatp
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 5 ans

    One more question - if your illustration won, how long do you think would it take to create circa 10 similar illustration in the same quality?

    • il y a 5 ans
  • kubatp
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 5 ans

    Hi Alexander,
    firstly I want to say - good work! You changed those parts which didn't look good and not is is one level better. I am giving it 5 stars, so it will be in our internal voting for the best illustration.
    If you still want to increase the chance to win the voting, there are two things which could be improved:
    - the beard is very nice! It really is. Unfortunately it doesnt fit the existing style (and beards in general). Please look at examples in description to see how the current illustrations are done.
    - the column and floor are very simple and don't fit the quality of the rest of the illustration.

    If you dont want to do anymore changes, it is ok. We will already add your illustration for our poll. Right now it is you and two other illustrations.

    Once again, thank you!

    • il y a 5 ans