The adventures of Peter the Penguin - Page one
This was done with watercolor, I put the text just to show the children book feeling. text removable for sure.
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LinYunki
- il y a 10 ans
To show they went fish hunting, they're wearing basket and fishing rod. :)
- il y a 10 ans
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Titulaire du concours - il y a 10 ans
I think that is beautiful as it is. The only thing is that the penguin on the left could be slightly improved not sure if that can be done but the style is beautiful. I would suggest that this in its final form would be two pages with more landscape as you have without iceberg on the left and writing on the left. the right hand page would be as yours is but without writing. This is the best i have seen thank you
- il y a 10 ans
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LinYunki
- il y a 10 ans
Thank you for your kindly feedback :)
I can improve Peter's face more and make it two pages, no problem.
Can't wait to work on this story, wish to pass the contest :)- il y a 10 ans
