Content Writing - Rewrite an opening chapter

État: Closed
Prix: $200
Propositions reçues: 2
Gagnant: randomword

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Résumé du concours

I have written a fictional autobiography, and I am seeking to make the opening chapter more captivating and intriguing for the reader. I have attached the chapter, and I am seeking for you to rewrite it in any style you like, to really grab the readers attention. I like Hunter S Thompson, but the style choice can be yours if you think it will get the readers attention. You can add, remove, edit any aspects of the attached chapter, so please feel free to be creative. You're welcome to add sarcasm, or remove sarcasm, I don't mind. Do whatever you think will make the chapter more exciting/enjoyable to read.
I will award the winner as a guarantee, and will also likely ask for you to quote a price to review the entire novel (at your chosen hourly rate) if you are the winner.
Good luck. I look forward to reading the entries.
Please send your submissions through to me within the next 14 days.

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natander, Australia.

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bjfreeland
- il y a 6 ans
Good day Mr. Natander, kindly recheck #20
- il y a 6 ans
IkoroObinna
- il y a 7 ans
kindly check entry 18
- il y a 7 ans
SangeethaAshokan
- il y a 7 ans
Hi,
I'm not sure if I can make it on time but I'm going to try. Can I cut short some details? I kinda feel your first chapter is a little too explanatory.
- il y a 7 ans
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  - il y a 7 ans
  yes, whatever you'd like
  - il y a 7 ans
hirazaryaab
- il y a 7 ans
working on it...
- il y a 7 ans
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  Thank you
  - il y a 7 ans
alyhass
- il y a 7 ans
Hey, can you please give me some more information on the opening scene. where are you? what are you doing? is she talking to you on the phone or in person? Later on in the book, how often do you speak directly to the reader?
- il y a 7 ans
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  - il y a 7 ans
  Hi alyhass. Please feel free to make the assumptions you feel. The intent of this is to also understand your style and creativity to create an engaging opening chapter. Best wishes
  - il y a 7 ans
ossanomirukadenn
- il y a 7 ans
i have not yet gotten exactly what is all about contests but all i know, i can creatively write anything that comes my way. i have seen the chapter too, i will write it in all ways of creativity. am a teacher of literature. thank you
- il y a 7 ans
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  - il y a 7 ans
  ok thank you
  - il y a 7 ans
vinita1804
- il y a 7 ans
Hi, is it okay if I edit the document using 'track changes' mode and attach the pdf version since there is a character limit? Thanks, regards...
- il y a 7 ans
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  - il y a 7 ans
  That's fine. Yes you can do that. There is no character limit, so please be as creative as you like.
  - il y a 7 ans
IkoroObinna
- il y a 7 ans
dear contest holder what are you looking for in your chapter that is not presently there? i mean what exactly are we supposed to add to it? Humor? Anger?
- il y a 7 ans
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  - il y a 7 ans
  Humour would work, yes. It's not an angry novel.
  Also any engaging environment descriptions. I fell like it's static as the moment, so any excitement in style or content would be good. I want the reader to read the first chapter and want to read on. It could be more fast paced.
  - il y a 7 ans