I need a better ABOUT US page - help me with the text

Please look at this page [url removed, login to view]

its a mess... far to much text and chaos.

I want a nice looking, appealing, thrustworty page that give people a good feeling.

I want to know WHAT an about us page should include...............

I run a dogschool, so ppl who would read this is potensial clients at my school. I need this about us to be a kickstart, and i need pointers to get the people to move on to the classes after reading this.

I will give $30 for help with this.


Compétences : Réécriture d'Articles, Article Writing, Ghostwriting, Rédaction scientifique, Rédaction Technique

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( 114 commentaires ) ISE, Norway

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Hi -- I would be happy to help you with your project. I bring many years of experience to the table and am an award winning writer. I have written specifically about dogs, training and canine schools. Please see my pri Plus

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8 freelance font une offre moyenne de $30 pour ce travail


Being a platinum level expert Ezine author and having 4 years of writing expertise (articles, rewriting, blogs, ghostwriting etc), I am 100% confident that I can deliver you high quality, plagiarism free, seo friendly Plus

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Let me help you out on this and make yourself fully satisfied like others :)

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Hello, My bid is for 1 High Quality About us page. Good Work at Affordable Price, 100% Milestone Required. Kind regards.

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I can write Ezine quality articles, plus SEO and BMR as well as Product Reviews and can do content development for any niche. Give me a chance to become part of your Team. 100% Grammatically correct English is guarante Plus

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Hello, I want to take your project. I assure you that my work will be fine and perfect. Fond Regards

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I can help you with your problem....

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Hello Sir/Madam Hope you are doing well. I am Saira an online entrepreneur having 2 year experience of providing virtual assistance. I have worked on various data entry, internet research and administrative projects Plus

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