Please look at this page [url removed, login to view]
its a mess... far to much text and chaos.
I want a nice looking, appealing, thrustworty page that give people a good feeling.
I want to know WHAT an about us page should include...............
I run a dogschool, so ppl who would read this is potensial clients at my school. I need this about us to be a kickstart, and i need pointers to get the people to move on to the classes after reading this.
I will give $30 for help with this.