I need to rewrite a research in finance attached below
objective , introduction and literature review is the parts needed
this the comments
modify the title of your project as following "Appraisal of the Banking Performance: Case of Conventional and Islamic Banks".
Please edit your introduction and your research objective accordingly. You don't need to collect a new data. We will be using the same that you have collected it.
So basically, in your graduation project, you will be working on Introduction, Literature Review and conclusion.
Also please to send me your research proposal posted on Blackboard and work in progress without including your empirical analysis. You will get on each and it will be included in your final grade.
We can meet iA on the next Monday to discuss about your progress.