I have wrote first draft of the research proposal (1500) words and the whole project is 3500 words. The feedback that I have received from my supervisor criticized the explanation of the problem statement of my research topic so that I want to find a better way to explain it. Also, we have choice to choose one of three format to present the paper and I prefer 'Integrated paper' as you will see in the file attachment. The other important thing is the chosen of the method and material because I do not have any idea about the appropriate one that could suite my research topic. Also, I do not mind if you give me suggestions to refine my research questions, the aims and objectives of the topic.