i prefer if you were a native american or a brit
you need to read the story, replace terms suitably to with simple colloquial equivalents, add emotions where necessary or if the words are ok, shorten the story and then proofread/ check for errors of all kinds
in short- i need this short story retold and partly re written in a way that it appears well written, is global in appeal to kids across the sky and is engaging for both the child and the parent
the text in bold will be illustrated separately so there are visual cues in the book
ur the best !