Revise the below paragraph into "The paramedic Method"
The paragraph to be revised is:
At all times, students are expected to exercise good judgment in advertising their events. Advertising may not be attached to walls or buildings in a way that will cause permanent damage. Outside chalk signs on sidewalks are permitted only in areas accessible to rainfall, thereby eliminating the necessity of university maintenance staff personnel to wash off the writing. Writing on the sides of buildings and references to alcohol are not permitted. The staff person in each building who is responsible for posting notices in that building must be checked with to determine individual posting policies.
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The paramedic method will make your text concise and more meaningful. As an experienced copy editor, the method is a requisite part of my skill used in tightening text.
I graduated in Modern Languages and I have 20 years of experience in the field. Just browsing your article, it not only needs some corrections on grammar, but also there are a couple of ideas that could be changed.