Want an experienced copywriter to make 2 adjustments to my website copy. We already have a sales letter completed but here is what we need adjusted:
1.) Will need an angle in the sales letter played up by spending more time focusing on what the potential customer is going to learn from each individual involved with our product and telling their stories,rather than giving the long list of bullets in the copy now....You will have to research our product to make this adjustment and also research the individuals via google on the internet to tell their stories and/or get their stories from our product.
To recap you need to play up the angle in copy that says they will get the "collective wisdom of x amount people who have made it to the top ....people who have raised themselves from failure
to success in.....and who now want to teach them.....
2.)Also,i'll need you to review the bullets and break them up into clear sections..Just check to make sure they fit into each section or make up sections to make them fit as we will do another sales letter with bullets to run it against the sales letter without bullets and the adjustments listed under the #1 adjustment above.
I'll need everything back in html.
PM me for specifics and any questions you might have...
This should be a very easy project for someone that knows what they are doing in the copy writing field.