Hi,
I am interested in this project. My English Level is advanced. Strictly speaking, my nationality is Indian, but specifically I am Anglo-Indian, therefore a native English speaker. I enjoy writing. I dabble in poetry and used to contribute to my company's newsletter. (Am now a stay at home mom)
Here's my version of the passage to be rewritten:
"I am a fitness trainer in a gym and have observed that several new mothers enrol there, eager to regain their pre-baby figure. While I wish them well, I observe nevertheless that their progress is impeded by what my friends and I observed as a common phenomenon - overloading on calories from nutritively deficit junk foods! This phenomenon was so common in the gym that we actually named it the weight gain pregnancy."