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My 76,000-word fiction manuscript, “The Mistaken World,” has just been re-translated from Polish for its second English edition. I now need a fresh set of eyes to give it a light but meticulous pass. Your brief is straightforward: • Read the full manuscript in English and correct grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure wherever they interrupt flow. • Keep an eye on tone so every chapter sounds consistently like the same narrator. • Flag only the major moments where the English wording feels off compared with normal usage; I’m not looking for a line-by-line re-translation, just a note when something jars the reader. Please return two files: one with tracked changes and one clean, ready for layout. A concise style sheet or summary of recurring issues would also be helpful. If you enjoy polishing fiction and can preserve the voice that already lives on the page while tightening what needs tightening, I’m looking forward to working with you.
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Re-translated fiction requires a specific skillset: catching interference patterns where Polish syntax bleeds into English, maintaining narrative consistency across 76,000 words, and distinguishing between stylistic choice and translation artifact. This manuscript needs someone who reads for both mechanics and idiom. The work breaks into three distinct phases. First, a full read-through identifying grammar, punctuation, and structural issues that disrupt flow—this requires precision against a backdrop of intentional voice preservation. Second, tone consistency checks across all chapters to ensure the narrator remains unified. Third, flagging moments where English phrasing feels unnatural without rewriting the underlying translation—this demands restraint and clarity in notes. Delivering dual files (tracked and clean) plus a style sheet documenting recurring patterns ensures transparency and gives you actionable documentation for future editions. The output becomes both immediate publication-ready and a reference for consistency moving forward. This manuscript aligns squarely with polishing translated fiction while preserving authorial intent. Ready to begin immediately.
£250 GBP in 1 day
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Greetings! I can provide a light but meticulous pass on your fiction manuscript, correcting grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure while preserving the narrator's consistent tone. I will flag only major wording issues and deliver tracked-changes and clean files, plus a style sheet. I have experience with fiction polishing and can respect your voice. Let me know your preferred timeline and I will begin. Thanks, Revival
£250 GBP in 7 days
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I will provide you with 2 MSWord files upon completion, first one with the highlighted proofread version (so that you can figure out the proofreading) and the second with the accepted changes version (the final document). As a proofreader and editor (in both scenarios of structural editing and language editing), I am experienced and knowledgeable, with an eye for details. I have the tenacity and predilection to proofread and edit books (fiction and non-fiction), magazines, websites, as well as publications aimed at special audience such as academic writing journals or business reports. With a PhD in English as well as years of experience in curriculum design and teaching writing at various levels, I am skilled and knowledgeable in all types of proofreading and editing tasks. When it comes to editing and proofreading, I make sure that: The text is free of errors like typos, misspellings, grammatical mistakes, and punctuation errors. The content is engaging and readable to the readers’ retina. Style and tone is correct. Everything in the text conforms to the acceptable editing standards. You can fully count on me, and I am looking forward to working with you. Thanks
£300 GBP in 10 days
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The author of twelve published novels, I have over fifteen years' editing and proofreading experience. In that time, I've worked with all kinds of different writers - from first-time authors to the far more established - writing in all kinds of different genres: literary, historical, thriller, YA, romance, sci-fi/fantasy, etc. In terms of my working practices, I will lightly edit your 76,000-word novel in three stages. Firstly, a basic edit to eradicate any typos, grammatical lapses, the repetition of words/phrases, etc. Secondly, a deeper delve into the pacing, plot, structure, tone, character development/arcs, etc. And thirdly, a final read-through to ensure your work has that essential professional polish. Additionally, I will provide an interim assessment of the manuscript within twenty-four hours of receipt, just to give you my first impressions of your writing and let you know what kinds of changes I'm making. I use Track Changes in Word and can make a start right away. I look forward to hearing from you.
£350 GBP in 5 days
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Hi, I am very interested in this project. I am a PhD Book and Journal Editor with more than 25 years' experience. I have published over 70 research papers and am a native UK English speaker. I have availability to begin immediately. Please review my portfolio to see examples of my work and we can discuss further via chat. Thanks!
£750 GBP in 7 days
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I am PH.D writer 12+ years, And would have no problem providing you with the HIGH-Quality work you need. All my work is 100% my own and never Copied, Spun or Plagiarized, so you won’t have to worry about that at all. My three core values are EFFICIENCY, QUALITY, and EXPERTISE. I will deliver this work within the stipulated DEADLINE and a guarantee of NON-PLAGIARIZED work. Hire me, and you will get value for your money.
£250 GBP in 1 day
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Hello! I’d be happy to polish *The Mistaken World* with a light, meticulous editorial pass. I’ll refine grammar, punctuation, sentence flow, and consistency while preserving the translated voice, flagging only wording that noticeably jars. You’ll receive tracked-changes and clean layout-ready files, plus a concise style sheet. Could you share a sample chapter and the manuscript format?
£700 GBP in 7 days
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Re-translated fiction manuscripts carry a specific risk: words chosen by the translator may be technically correct but tonally inconsistent with native English narrative voice. The Mistaken World requires a handler who can distinguish between translation artifacts and authorial intent without over-editing the work. This project sits squarely in copy editing and proofreading territory. The manuscript will receive a comprehensive pass for grammar, punctuation, and sentence-level clarity, with particular attention to narrator consistency across 76,000 words. Tracked changes will isolate every substantive correction, while the clean version goes directly to layout. Recurring issues—whether they're translator patterns, inconsistent dialogue tags, or structural punctuation quirks—will be documented in a concise style sheet for your reference and future editions. The work preserves your existing voice while eliminating the friction points that pull readers out of narrative immersion. Two deliverables, clear documentation, and unlimited revisions ensure the manuscript enters production polished and publication-ready. Ready to start immediately.
£250 GBP in 1 day
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o I can handle your project on fiction editing and English-language manuscript polishing, with narrative tone. I can carefully review the full 76,000-word manuscript, correcting grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, and consistency. Also expert in using professional terminologies, vocabulary as per the given subject. o I read your project description and I am sure that I can handle your project. o Expert in correcting spellings as per the country requirement, o Expert in formatting, clearing plagiarism, edits, rewrites, paraphrasing o Also an expert in Research writing, research reports, essays and advance essays, dissertations. o Your project will be delivered on time with high standard. o Expert in in all referencing styles (APA/ Harvard / IEEE formatted.). o 100 % Assurance on zero percent plagiarism. o TURNITIN / COPYSCAPE plagiarism report will be provided along with completed work o Assistance will be provided with number of clarifications until client satisfaction Please connect in chat for more discussion, Regards, Jaya
£750 GBP in 1 day
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The Mistaken World now needs an editor who can hear when the English is technically correct but still doesn’t sound as if it has been written by a native speaker. I’ve worked professionally as an editor and writer for six years, and my background also includes teaching and teacher training in English as a Foreign Language to adults. That combination has given me a very close working knowledge of English grammar and usage, as well as an ear for phrasing that doesn’t sound natural. I would keep the editing deliberately light. If a sentence works, it stays. If the English jars, I’ll fix it; where something feels questionable but changing it could affect the author’s voice or meaning, I’ll flag it rather than decide on the author’s behalf. I will return the full manuscript with tracked changes and as a clean copy, together with a concise style sheet covering any recurring issues that need to be carried through the book. I’m a UK native English speaker with a degree in English and American Literature from the University of Manchester. I’m now based in Spain, so there is no significant time-zone difference between us. I’d be happy to take on the 76,000 words, so if you'd like to send over an extract from the novel, I could give you my initial thoughts and an estimate of the timeline required. Best regards, Julie Z.
£430 GBP in 7 days
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Hello, I’d be happy to give your 76,000-word fiction manuscript a careful editorial pass while preserving the existing voice and narrative style. I have extensive experience with English proofreading, editing, rewriting, and long-form manuscripts, including translated and academic/professional content. My approach would be light but meticulous, focusing on readability without unnecessarily changing the author’s voice. I will: * Correct grammar, punctuation, and sentence-structure issues that affect readability. * Improve awkward phrasing where it interrupts the natural flow. * Check consistency of tone and narration across chapters. * Flag major passages where the English feels unnatural or likely reflects the original-language structure. * Avoid unnecessary rewriting or line-by-line retranslation. * Provide a concise style sheet/summary of recurring issues where useful. * Deliver both a Track Changes version and a clean final version ready for layout. I’ll focus on making the English feel natural and polished while keeping the character, tone, and intent of the original translation intact. I’m ready to review the manuscript and begin immediately. Best regards.
£250 GBP in 3 days
3.8
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A second English edition is a great point to focus on polish rather than rewriting. With a 76,000-word translated novel, the goal should be to make the English read naturally while preserving the narrator’s voice and the character of the original work. I would read the full manuscript with a light editorial touch, correcting grammar, punctuation, awkward sentence structures, and phrasing that interrupts the reading flow. I’d pay particular attention to consistency of tone and narrator voice across chapters, while avoiding unnecessary changes simply because a sentence could be worded differently. Where something feels noticeably unnatural in English, I would flag it for your attention rather than attempting a full re-translation. This keeps the process focused on polishing the existing translation. You would receive both requested versions: a tracked-changes manuscript showing the edits and a clean version ready for layout. I would also provide a concise style sheet summarizing recurring language or formatting issues identified during the edit. Do you already have the translated manuscript in Word, or would you be working from another file format? .
£300 GBP in 7 days
3.6
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As a seasoned professional with over 8 years of experience, I have honed my skills in copy editing, copywriting, editing, and proofreading to the highest degree of precision. I have a meticulous nature and an unwavering eye for detail which I believe makes me an ideal fit for your project. Having completed 900+ projects thus far and maintaining a five-star rating throughout, I can assure you that every sentence of your novel will be examined with exactitude, from grammar to punctuation, ensuring that the flow is maintained while eliminating any inconsistencies. Moreover, I recognize the importance of maintaining your narrator's voice throughout the manuscript; I understand its centrality to the reading experience. During my extensive career, I have worked on various fiction novels encompassing diverse genres which has given me valuable insight into preserving an author's tone whilst tightening up areas that need it. Finally, providing you with exceptional value is always at the forefront of my mind. In addition to returning two files-one with tracked changes and one clean for layout-I will furnish you with a concise style sheet or summary of recurring issues for your references. My efficiency coupled with my ability to provide insightful feedback will be critical in enhancing your manuscript's impact while keeping true to its original voice. Let me prove to you why my long-standing clients continue to entrust their important projects to me by hiring today!
£250 GBP in 2 days
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As an accomplished wordsmith and passionate author myself, I deeply appreciate the nuances of language and its transformative power within a narrative. Having earned my PhD in Healthcare Administration, my strengths extend beyond healthcare consulting and strategy, aligning seamlessly with your project's need for expert editing, proofreading, and creative writing. After 14 years in the field, I've honed my skills in preserving tone and improving flow while maintaining the integrity of a voice. Your manuscript deserves meticulous attention to detail and a keen understanding of pacing. Given my experience in risk management and compliance where consistency is paramount, I can ensure that each chapter of "The Mistaken World" drips with the same suspenseful, intoxicating narration that has captivated your readers. Lastly, organization is central to me in all aspects of my work. Rest-assured that alongside two files – one with tracked changes and another clean – you'll receive a summary of recurring issues which will not just enhance this novel but also prove invaluable for future ones. Stylishly-tailored yet strictly professional, these deliverables will showcase the strength of your narrative, enhancing readability while respecting the original voice. With me, every Polish word will undergo an incisive alchemy into English so smooth it will seem penned from inception in your penetrable hands.
£500 GBP in 7 days
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Hi, Aashiq here from Cape Town, South Africa. This project instantly caught my eye, so I had to reach out. I see you’re looking for someone to meticulously proofread your 76,000-word manuscript, “The Mistaken World.” It’s crucial to maintain the tone and flow while ensuring the English reads naturally. I’ve worked with several authors helping them refine their manuscripts for publication. My experience includes editing fiction to enhance readability while preserving the unique voice of the narrative. I’m confident I can deliver the results you’re after, and I’d be happy to share samples of my previous work. Based on what you mentioned, here is how we would approach the project: - A thorough read-through to catch grammar and structure issues - Consistent tone checks throughout each chapter - A summary of any notable recurring issues You can count on me for clear communication and delivering a seamless, user-focused solution optimized for your manuscript’s success. Best Regards, Aashiq
£700 GBP in 14 days
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Hello, my name is Miguel. I have read your offer's description about proofreading a manuscript of over 76000 words and I'm interested. I have over 14 years of experience working as an English proofreader. I can look for any possible remaining grammar, spelling, punctuation, typos or any other kinds of writing mistakes that your manuscript might still contain and clean them all without any troubles. If you want to speak with me, we can talk on the chat.
£500 GBP in 7 days
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Subject: Novel Proofreading – 76,000 Words, Light Copy Edit, Track Changes You need a light but thorough proofread of your 76,000-word novel manuscript. I can do that. What I do: Correct grammar, punctuation, and sentence flow Keep each narrator‘s voice consistent Flag unnatural English phrasing (not full retranslation) Deliver: tracked changes file + clean copy + style guide/summary of common issues Trial: First 5 pages free. You check quality. You like it, we go. Rate: $0.01–$0.02 per word (or per hour, negotiable) Why me: Ghostwrote two books for a UK publisher (5.0 stars). I proofread novels and keep the author’s voice intact. Timezone note: I’m in China (UTC+8). If you have feedback, just leave a message. I check regularly and respond within hours. My service philosophy: Delivery is just the beginning. Service has no end. Send me the first 5 pages. I‘ll show you what I can do. Chen
£250 GBP in 7 days
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Hello, I would be very interested in working on “The Mistaken World.” I have previous experience working on book editing and publication projects, including detailed manuscript review, formatting, consistency checks, and preparation of clean final files for publication. For your 76,000-word manuscript, I can carefully review grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, consistency, and readability while respecting the existing narrative voice. I understand that you are looking for a light but meticulous edit, not a re-translation or an unnecessary rewriting of the author's style. I can provide exactly the deliverables you requested: • A complete version with tracked changes • A clean, publication-ready version • A concise summary of recurring issues and relevant observations I am comfortable working methodically through a long manuscript and maintaining consistency from the first chapter to the last. I can complete the project within 14 days and would be happy to discuss your preferred editing conventions before starting. Best regards, Diego
£450 GBP in 14 days
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With a meticulous eye for detail, I have the proven ability to transform text without altering its authentic voice - precisely what your project requires. My skills in proofreading, combined with experience in system improvements and workflow solutions, equip me to not just rectify any grammatical or structural errors, but also enhance the overall flow of your manuscript. I understand the subtleties of language and can ensure your narrator's voice remains consistent throughout the story. In addition to being an exceptional proofreader, I possess well-honed problem-solving skills that have allowed me to identify and resolve issues quickly and efficiently. This would be particularly valuable as I'll be able to identify any major moments where the English wording feels off compared with the original Polish version, giving your readers a more seamless experience. Lastly, my proficiency in creating concise style sheets and summarizing recurring issues can aid your formatting process and provide you with valuable insights for future translations. Working together, we can turn your translated work into a polished masterpiece ready for publication. Let's bring your "The Mistaken World" alive for its new English-speaking audience!
£250 GBP in 1 day
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Hi there, I am excited about the opportunity to work on your project, "The Mistaken World." I understand the importance of maintaining the original voice and tone of the novel while ensuring clarity and consistency in the English translation. My approach involves conducting a thorough review of the manuscript to address grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure issues that may disrupt the flow. I will also pay close attention to maintaining a cohesive narrative voice throughout the novel. Additionally, I will provide detailed feedback on any instances where the English wording deviates from natural usage. I am confident that my meticulous editing skills and passion for fiction will help elevate your manuscript to its fullest potential. I look forward to discussing how we can collaborate further on this project. Best regards, Inshaal Ali
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