Hi,
I will give you constructive, sensitive feedback - the kind you won't get from a family member on the the one hand, or some asshole publishing office junior on the other.
Humorous writing is hard, and one person's laugh-out-loud funny is another person's emergency toilet paper - so I won't be judging how funny (or not) your writing is. I'm not a professional editor, but I have enough of an imagination for your characters to live in my head for a while, so I'll know if they say or do things that don't add up to a consistent whole. Likewise for the world that you've built - if it doesn't grow organically, or if you haven't let the reader in on a secret (you know because it's your world, they might not if you haven't told them clearly), I'll let you know. Comments in Word or Google Docs would be a good way to do this.
So if you happen to see this in amongst all the "I am an editor with 8 experience years and I edit you text to standard professional", drop me a line and we can talk about what you need.
Kind Regards,
Tom O'Brien