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  • RedDolch
    RedDolch
    • il y a 10 ans

    Thanks for the Feedback, I will take your suggestions and see if I can come up with something more to what you have said.

    • il y a 10 ans
  • portfora
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 10 ans

    thanks for the submission, and for taking on board my new suggestions. It's not bad, and I think you could do something good with the swirls. Here's some constructive feedback:

    - I'm not keen on separating out PORT and FORA - they should be one colour, one word
    - the fleur de lys is a little to blocky/angular/straight at the top, and loses the curl at the bottom
    but I like the swirls added in together. and just noticed the subtle P and F in the bottom. I feel they could be worked into the main leaves on the left/right?

    • il y a 10 ans