Updated version
Hi, This is the edited submission of my first draft. I just want to clarify that “About Us” page should tell a story you (how you started your company or how and why you got into this business in the first place etc.). The “About Us” page should, of course, not be a biography, but it should give potential customers a little bit of information about who you are and your values. It will give your company a brand personality and once they get to know you, they will love what you do. With that in mind, the “About Us” page needs to be written in a way that avoids corporate speak. So it is better to write it in a personal tone to inspire trust and be lovable and memorable. That being said, I would like to edit my submission if you can provide more information to humanize Heyl Homes.