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Hi, This is the edited submission of my first draft. I just want to clarify that “About Us” page should tell a story you (how you started your company or how and why you got into this business in the first place etc.). The “About Us” page should, of course, not be a biography, but it should give potential customers a little bit of information about who you are and your values. It will give your company a brand personality and once they get to know you, they will love what you do. With that in mind, the “About Us” page needs to be written in a way that avoids corporate speak. So it is better to write it in a personal tone to inspire trust and be lovable and memorable. That being said, I would like to edit my submission if you can provide more information to humanize Heyl Homes.

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  • optimatech
    optimatech
    • il y a 6 ans

    Hi,

    I see there are many new entries. So I am sure you are busy. I just ask for five minutes of your time regarding the edited version my last submission.

    I have an Executive MBA and have been involved in academic writing for the past 10 years. Even though I am just getting my foot in the door here, at freelancer.com.

    I am well aware of what businesses should do to improve and what they should avoid. One of the important things businesses forget about the 'About Us' page is to grab potential customers' attention, tell your story to win their hearts and minds. So I wanted to avoid the kind of generic 'About Us' corporate speak that can be found on many other websites and create something more personal, memorable, as a genuine company with real people who care.

    I wanted to clarify what I meant by “to humanize Heyl Homes”, to make potential customers understand there is a foundation of values that drives the company in its dedication to excellence.

    Thank you

    • il y a 6 ans
  • optimatech
    optimatech
    • il y a 6 ans

    I just want to clarify that “About Us” page should tell a story about* you (how you started your company or how and why you got into this business in the first place etc.).

    • il y a 6 ans