Rewrite some Articles

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I have video narratives that need to be reviewed and edited to make it cartoon animation friendly.

I have provided two variations of each one. please attach your modified text so i can review and decide who wins the contest.

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  • naval97
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    Hi, i am working on it, just need few hours, will submit before deadline.

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  • kikitaruiz
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    Hello, I just posted a new entry. Please review entry #17 and let me know

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    this may help when making your content... https://www.facebook.com/policies/ads/prohibited_content/personal_attributes

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Your ad wasn't approved because it doesn't follow our Advertising Policies by addressing the age and/or relationship status of people on Facebook e.g., "Single and Lonely?", or "40 and Single?"

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    When making the text, please ensure that it follows Facebook terms of use. This is another point...

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  • kikitaruiz
    kikitaruiz
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    Hello, I just uploaded a new entry, if you can please review it, it is number 16. Thank you!

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  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
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    Kindly review entry #13

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Also please stay within the range of 70-80 words per text set as it needs to stay within 30 seconds.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Quality is getting better for some. These are just my observations. Sharing it with everyone to stay fair.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Also i notice terms which are being used that may not be commonly understood by the majority in the united states or canada. This is most probably due to where you grew up or the kind of english that is influenced by the area you grew up in. Best to ask yourself if it is commonly said.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    This is kind of hard to explain. It has to appear or sound like you are talking to a friend and selling them on the idea of this. It would help if you have been through the same thing the site is selling, depending on the stage in your life. This makes the short statement feel like it comes from the heart rather than from the mind. Some are written better now but I feel that it needs that friend approach. or the "i know where you are coming from because i have been there" feeling to it.

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  • vraghavendran
    vraghavendran
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    Kindly Check #9! Thanks

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    All entries are read by two groups here. We ask, which text is easier to understand and which text grabs you more? So far, majority have chosen original text over adjusted text. I suggest having someone read it and ask the same. Do not say which one you did. This might help.

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  • supersystemng
    supersystemng
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    Please review our entries and rate them. Thanks

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Keep text to 70 to 80 words for each one. Text must be in the 30-40 second range.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Try to stay away from over the top statements to reach a broader audience or use words that will soften excessive words. For example. Instead of saying bankrupt, say cash strapped.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    Best to make wording concise and straight to the point. It needs to appeal to three needs of the listener.

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  • eugeniomgonzalez
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    writing needs to be a sales pitch as it is a video presentation. Also keep word count in the range of 70 words to keep video per stint at 30 -40 seconds.

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