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Take the train

Hi Here is my entry for the contest.https://drive.google.com/file/d/160RvbPAHXRBqTgNdY4FTCc27_S5PTK67/view?usp=sharing Now let me explain what I did. So I actually simplified the chord progression in order to transform it into a more popish one. I also changed the groove from your original shuffle to a straight twist like pattern that in my opinion is more suitable for a song dedicated to this age group. therefore the vocal melody should be adjusted accordingly. So I did the intro, one A section and one B section for you to evaluate the quality of my work.However on the B section I added a train horn sound that will separate the first two lines. So you'll have "Take the Train to the East" - train horn, "Take the Train to the west" -train horn then the next line will be on that break with the same phrasing in your demo. If you'd like me to record a guiding vocal track to clarify it please just let me know. Ok so here is the link https://drive.google.com/file/d/160RvbPAHXRBqTg

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  • Yonei
    Yonei
    • il y a 3 mois

    Wow, that sounds amazing! Deserved winner definitely.

    • il y a 3 mois
    1. geluionescu
      geluionescu
      • il y a 3 mois

      Thank you man!

      • il y a 3 mois
  • AndrewScottMusic
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 3 mois

    Well done Gelu.
    Before I listened, I read your comments, and it was very difficult for me to let go of the swing feel, but you have produced such a catchy presentation that I couldn't help liking it.
    And I agree, it is more appropriate for children with a straight rhythm.
    Let's see what other entries come up.
    Yours is the best so far.

    • il y a 3 mois