radio advertisment

  • Status: Closed
  • Prize: $73
  • Entries Received: 5

Contest Brief

I need a 30 second script for an ad for my business


this is for a radio ad, and all that is required is the script.

the name of the business is premiumcollectables.com.au

but to see our business in its old name go to premiumcollect.com.au

to see what type of business we are

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  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    this is a very frustrating competition , im no longer providing feedback to anyone who does not read the brief or comments, huge examples of frustratation, im targeting 18-30 yo's the language used in most ads is not what these ppl respond to. secondly modern collectables not vintage or antiiques, thirdly there is one voice over not two, stop sending entries that need 2

    • 11 years ago
    1. JAusten
      JAusten
      • 11 years ago

      I'm sorry.

      • 11 years ago
    2. designblast001
      designblast001
      • 11 years ago

      Don't lose hope yet on all of us :) Kindly check and rate my entry #78 ...IT IS AN ONE PERSON ad script ...hope You like it and I've a couple more ideas , which, unfortunately couldn't submit in the contest .

      • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    Please read my below comments , I will not just pick anyone, I have not seen any ads worthy of going onto Radio to be heard by thousands .

    • 11 years ago
    1. TheGuyver2040
      TheGuyver2040
      • 11 years ago

      Please see Private Message Board.

      • 11 years ago
  • hyroglifbeats
    hyroglifbeats
    • 11 years ago

    mushakirin you have no class... anyone with two eyes can read your entry which was entered after mine and can see it... we are not in first grade to play these games... if you are a man act like one, and if you are a woman behave in a righteous manner, I am not disrespecting you to apologize.. read my entry No. 65 and then your entry No. 68 and tell me they are not the same.. you changed a word here and there... writing is a skill, not copying. Probably neither of us will get chosen for the job, and am okay with that, but you need to stay in your lane and use your skills correctly, this is not the way to make your way in here. All freelancers here take time and dedication when doing work, and this is not the way.

    • 11 years ago
  • mushakirin
    mushakirin
    • 11 years ago

    Contest holder note that copying fellow freelancer's work is not in my dictionary and is something that I have never been accused before.The brief is very clear.hyroglifbeats please apolgise.

    • 11 years ago
  • hyroglifbeats
    hyroglifbeats
    • 11 years ago

    Contest holder please note that entry number 68 is a complete copy of my work. Thank you.

    • 11 years ago
  • djhanz
    djhanz
    • 11 years ago

    Entered at #67

    • 11 years ago
  • TheGuyver2040
    TheGuyver2040
    • 11 years ago

    Jkipsd, Any feedback on the submitted entries?

    • 11 years ago
  • SneR85
    SneR85
    • 11 years ago

    Fresh new idea #58. Greetings

    • 11 years ago
    1. SneR85
      SneR85
      • 11 years ago

      Also check: #59. Greetings

      • 11 years ago
  • SneR85
    SneR85
    • 11 years ago

    Greetings, one more idea written based on your website, brief and comments. It can be said by one person and I think it targets audience from 18 to 30. But I am willing to try harder if you think so. #57

    • 11 years ago
  • SneR85
    SneR85
    • 11 years ago

    Feel free to check my ideas for your advertisment: #54 #55 and #56. Greetings, SneR85

    • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    no conversation scripts. we are hiring one voice over only, so its more a description of our services and I prfer more generic products not individual naming of products as this limits what people think we sell

    • 11 years ago
    1. harsha442
      harsha442
      • 11 years ago

      I think some popular individual titles like 'Breaking Bad,''avengers,' or 'Walking dead' attract the listeners more… Don't you think?
      you can say you have broad set of collections anyway...

      • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    WE DO NOT SELL VINTAGE ITEMS

    • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    the word seek or seeking is not to be used in this AD

    • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    think im clear this is RADIO ad not a print ad, so many of the entries are print ad themed, not acceptable for this project

    • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    alot of submissions talk about online order tracking, this is pointless to mention in the ad and waste of words , please dont include online tracking in your scripts. also I dont want frozen mentioned either

    • 11 years ago
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    1. HOCOWritersInc
      HOCOWritersInc
      • 11 years ago

      I agree. Some selling points and info about targeting audience would be helpful.

      • 11 years ago
    2. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      target audience has been mentioned at least 3 times now, also in the brief

      • 11 years ago
  • jkipsd
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    online tracking, DO NOT MENTION IT IN THE AD < IT IS A WASTE OF WORDS, ALSO VINTAGE , STOP IT PLEASE, GO TO MY WEBSITE< LOOK AT WHAT WE SELL , SO MANY IRRELEVANT ENTRIES

    • 11 years ago
  • creazinedesign
    creazinedesign
    • 11 years ago

    hello sir... you want to promote any special scheme for this radio promotion? i need some information about: (1) any music or sound related combination i want so give me just little idea about which type of theme this business..(means traditional, slow theme, soft or fast) (2) give some prior service name or word that you want to prompt strongly in ad (3) any tagline or slogan you have (4) main character focus o your business - child, women or man?

    • 11 years ago
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    1. creazinedesign
      creazinedesign
      • 11 years ago

      what about are you saying ?

      • 11 years ago
    2. creazinedesign
      creazinedesign
      • 11 years ago

      yaaa....got it, unfortunately i created script in reference of premiumcollectables.com.au.. sorry

      • 11 years ago
  • JAusten
    JAusten
    • 11 years ago

    Is this only available online?

    • 11 years ago
    1. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      ?

      • 11 years ago
  • AgalyaV
    AgalyaV
    • 11 years ago

    Are you saying its an FM if so please tell the language...

    • 11 years ago
    1. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      fm

      • 11 years ago
    2. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      I think we language barrier is evident here, thanks anyway

      • 11 years ago
  • shiblysajibs
    shiblysajibs
    • 11 years ago

    Hello I am Sajib I see Job details. I am ready to deliver your task as per your requirement.
    I have been working in the field of Data-Entry, Photo-Shop, Logo Design, Graphics Design, Photo Editing etc job from the last 4 years. I am good fit for your projects as i always be sincere with my clients and with my work. I aim to bring a modern but experienced approach to your projects. Allow me to provide you good services based on my experience and bring you vision to life. Looking forward to hear from you.


    Thanks

    • 11 years ago
    1. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      relavance?

      • 11 years ago
  • talalmog
    talalmog
    • 11 years ago

    Do you prefer a script with humor or must it be totally serious?

    • 11 years ago
    1. jkipsd
      Contest Holder
      • 11 years ago

      target audience is 18-35. Im not sure we sell any funny products. so serious enough

      • 11 years ago
  • creazinedesign
    creazinedesign
    • 11 years ago

    & please make continues conversation so we can solve out any question or ask for suggestion

    • 11 years ago
  • corrineestena
    corrineestena
    • 11 years ago

    Hello -- Let us know when you get the information for the contest!

    • 11 years ago

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