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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 5 ans

  I do like the cartoonish characters in number 11 & 12 but would prefer two women instead of a man and a kid. It would look good in the book from # 7 or # 9?

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  dinart

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  what do you think about #12

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  Dumindu1992

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  any feedback about #1

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 5 ans

     I don't think I like the rainbow effect. Wouldn't mind the people being a bit less flat. They should be passing something as well. Also don't think the words really follow the path. Looks more like just two arches from here. I like the font and the book looks fine.

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     Dumindu1992

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     sorry about 8# that image did not upload
     check #9 thanks

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 5 ans

  I like the font/title from number 1.
  The book used in 3, 4, and 5 is almost there. Could look a little more professional, but not bad.
  The book in 2 is good, but I'd like to see it the same size as the others and straighter.
  The characters' shapes in 3, 4, and 5 are better than the ones in number 2. - Would like to see what they look like on the pages of book 2.
  As far as their colors, could you try cream or light brown or one solid color for a bottom (pants/skirt) and a different solid color for the top (shirt)? (head any color) Also try some "kids drawn" teachers like #6 , but make them look like adults.

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  Marcsourc3

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  Leave your feedback on # 6
  I know that was not quite what I wanted, but wanted to try.
  The center image is a bit childish, but do not know what "target audience."

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 5 ans

  I will have more feedback for everyone in 30 min.

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