Logo for Touring Company

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  Thank you everyone of your great work. Looking forward to working with you guys in the future.

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  #40
  Thank you
  What I meant is to leave the white wall with the 4 rectangle shapes on the top, and the dome/sun, and without the blue part.
  we can try with a line that defines the top of the wall (brown?) or just without.

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     Vpfaff

     • il y a 11 ans

     Hello, it's a simple thing, i'v made a logotype ( i work hard, and spend hours like you ! )
     and now, we are working together to make it simply better, if you have a great design, then you can also work with the client to get closer to his needs.. it's just obvious, i don't see why it isn't fair, let the best win the entry...

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     Every one can read the indications, they are not privet.
     Thank you very much for your work, Its beautiful, and I did feedback it, but it's not exactly what I needed.
     It says in the brief - minimal, elegant, shows light, perhaps inspiration and friendship.. Vpfaff was closer with his offers to the companies need. You have great work and I have many projects. I'm sure that if not this time, in the future we'll work together.

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  between #40 the one on the left, and #49 the one on the left. it's hard to decide..
  I loved that you notices this nuance in the shape of the dome, that it can be round like a sun or have more the dome of the rock shape.
  I wounder which one is better for marketing and products and stuff..

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  Vpfaff

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  #13

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     Hello,
     I am interested t know, how would the logo look like if it's more simple. Like if we leave just the dome and the sun ray, and the wall. no people, no words, and no gateways.
     What do you think, a logo like that will be easier to work with and easier to brand our service?

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     Vpfaff

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     #40

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  ap051

  • il y a 11 ans

  i mean hello

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  ap051

  • il y a 11 ans

  hell

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  thanks a lot,
  It isn't really what I'm looking for -
  too many colors, too complicated, too religious.
  the logo should show the insight, inspiration, refreshment, friendship, old-new combination.
  It should be solid, clean, 1-2 colors, young, cool...

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  #3
  I like the clean elegant look.
  things that I'm missing in this draft:
  - friendship
  - People looking inspired (like those looking at the sunrise on my draft)
  - In and Site different colors
  - the sunrise or something else expressing the inspiration and beauty
  - modern look
  Is it's possible to add and element to have this - this might be it.
  How about adding sun rays to the dome so it can be ether a dome or a sunrise?
  or add a path going into the gate?

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     I'm thinking maybe a stronger color. maybe orange gold

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     and maybe blue instead of brown will make it lighter, and remind of Israeli flag colors

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  tamrin05

  • il y a 11 ans

  I apologise it isnt a boat in the last one i uploaded its clearer. What sort of friendship are you looking for

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     thanks
     I tend to like a logo that is a siple shape, 1-2 colors, well defined.

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     *simple

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  #8 looks great, I like a lot the continuous affect.
  How about a round gateway, and square shape of the top of the wall. and add the inspired people looking towards the sunrise.

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     mix717

     • il y a 11 ans

     #11 please review

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     I mean the top of the wall where there is a rectangle space between bricks on the top row

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  Vpfaff

  • il y a 11 ans

  #12 please do you own creation, it's just disrespectful ... I spend a lot of time when i do my logotype's creation... please do the same and show some respect for my work

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  Titulaire du concours

  • il y a 11 ans

  #9 I like a lot. I wonder how it wuold look like with different shapes of peoples shadows. Or/and a path into the gate.

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     Vpfaff

     • il y a 11 ans

     allright,i will try several propositions tomorrow...

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  tamrin05

  • il y a 11 ans

  I attempted something different, let me know what you think

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     Thank you
     This one is a little unclear, especially on small print.
     The boat doesn't belong,
     the two people should have massage of friendship and inspiration.

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  tamrin05

  • il y a 11 ans

  Hi let me know if I am on the right track and what you would like more of in the logo

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     Hi,
     Thanks for your suggestion. It looks very nice. I'm looking for something that will have the elements that were in the draft that I posted- like The shape of the top of the wall.

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     Titulaire du concours

     • il y a 11 ans

     Also the difference between the In-Site should be clear

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