I need some Graphic Design

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Hi Please check the design and let me know your feedback. Thanks

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  • voiceovercity
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 8 ans

    This is a bit better than the first design. We're still concerned that you are not utilizing the space very well. Please give it one more try and this time, focus on providing more 'Fill' for the page so there are minimal areas of small text. For instance, in the red box labeled 'Production' you have about 20% Fill with a bunch of empty space. This is making the actual content area smaller than it needs to be. It would be better to have the 'Bubbles' inside the content areas so you have more space available for making the content larger.

    • il y a 8 ans
    1. SDWEB CREATION
      SDWEB CREATION
      • il y a 8 ans

      will submit the revised design ASAP. Thanks

      • il y a 8 ans
  • voiceovercity
    Titulaire du concours
    • il y a 8 ans

    Again, this is better than the first design, but still needs work. Thanks

    • il y a 8 ans