Content Writing - Rewrite an opening chapter

  • État: Closed
  • Prix: $200
  • Propositions reçues: 2
  • Gagnant: randomword

Résumé de concours

I have written a fictional autobiography, and I am seeking to make the opening chapter more captivating and intriguing for the reader. I have attached the chapter, and I am seeking for you to rewrite it in any style you like, to really grab the readers attention. I like Hunter S Thompson, but the style choice can be yours if you think it will get the readers attention. You can add, remove, edit any aspects of the attached chapter, so please feel free to be creative. You're welcome to add sarcasm, or remove sarcasm, I don't mind. Do whatever you think will make the chapter more exciting/enjoyable to read.
I will award the winner as a guarantee, and will also likely ask for you to quote a price to review the entire novel (at your chosen hourly rate) if you are the winner.
Good luck. I look forward to reading the entries.
Please send your submissions through to me within the next 14 days.

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  • bjfreeland
    bjfreeland
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    Good day Mr. Natander, kindly recheck #20

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  • IkoroObinna
    IkoroObinna
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    kindly check entry 18

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  • SangeethaAshokan
    SangeethaAshokan
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    Hi,
    I'm not sure if I can make it on time but I'm going to try. Can I cut short some details? I kinda feel your first chapter is a little too explanatory.

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      yes, whatever you'd like

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  • hirazaryaab
    hirazaryaab
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    working on it...

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      Thank you

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  • alyhass
    alyhass
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    Hey, can you please give me some more information on the opening scene. where are you? what are you doing? is she talking to you on the phone or in person? Later on in the book, how often do you speak directly to the reader?

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      Hi alyhass. Please feel free to make the assumptions you feel. The intent of this is to also understand your style and creativity to create an engaging opening chapter. Best wishes

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  • ossanomirukadenn
    ossanomirukadenn
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    i have not yet gotten exactly what is all about contests but all i know, i can creatively write anything that comes my way. i have seen the chapter too, i will write it in all ways of creativity. am a teacher of literature. thank you

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      ok thank you

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  • vinita1804
    vinita1804
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    Hi, is it okay if I edit the document using 'track changes' mode and attach the pdf version since there is a character limit? Thanks, regards...

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      That's fine. Yes you can do that. There is no character limit, so please be as creative as you like.

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  • IkoroObinna
    IkoroObinna
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    dear contest holder what are you looking for in your chapter that is not presently there? i mean what exactly are we supposed to add to it? Humor? Anger?

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    1. natander
      Titulaire du concours
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      Humour would work, yes. It's not an angry novel.
      Also any engaging environment descriptions. I fell like it's static as the moment, so any excitement in style or content would be good. I want the reader to read the first chapter and want to read on. It could be more fast paced.

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