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  • Lishi
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    Hi, if you do submit new entries, please include a black & yellow version as we are still unsure if we go with either Italian colours or black/yellow. Thank you

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  • Lishi
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    Hi, sorry I don't know why this one has been rejected before as I quite like the idea behind it.

    Good subtle use of the Italian colours, I like how it does not look too cliche but it reminds of Italian food.

    Overall it's great but I find the G difficult to read at first glance and the "tail" of the "i" a bit disproportioned.

    You've got a great base and if you are willing to make some changes, there is high chance that it could work.

    I know you tried to integrate an illustration of a gnocchi before but I didn't like it as it didn't really look like one.

    Perhaps you need to integrate one or more gnocchi (abstract illustration) to make it more food orientated and add a bit of what we do. Not sure how or where but could be at the bottom where the tail is "flying". I let your imagination work as I am sure you could come up with something great.

    Looking forward to seeing more! I have extended the contest to provide more time.

    Thank yu

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    1. CREArTIVEds
      CREArTIVEds
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      Thanks for the feedback. I will come up with a few versions

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