SVB Brochure
This is my hard work in day. Feel free to give me feedback, I ll make optimization. Best regards
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codeunderground
- il y a 10 ans
Thanks for all of your comments. I ll make change in next version
- il y a 10 ans
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Titulaire du concours - il y a 10 ans
page 5: I have another page on graphic design that is designed by you.... I will use that with its notes....
page 6 All good, I will make the pictures stand out a bit more....
Page 7: dont use my pictures ta very quick and dirty botch job that I did .... I will also shrink it in less than half a page... It is one of the concepts that why why someone should buy from us... goes with the company profile so you can club that as well....
page 8 - again screen real estate is not effectively utilised..
I think in general, you have dropped all the text, may I suggest you use it with the picture...even if you encounter pictures that need to be bought I will, but for now you can use a watermarked version that is more relevant.- il y a 10 ans
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Titulaire du concours - il y a 10 ans
You are heading in the right direction few things if you can do ...
Page1: Looks like a PPT, if you can make it a bit more punchy and crisp with colors
Page2: I will reduce this infomation to comver not more than half page for partners and users or even a third of the page ... this can be last page with contact details, and may be a big building in melboune to show office - 101 collins street melbourne australia .... then a row of partners .
Page3: Queue behaviour and efficicy pic is most relevant..others I am not sure of ... demand heat map is for a shopping area.
Page 4: again it is inclining towards a powerpoint presentation ...can you combine text and pictures together....- il y a 10 ans
