Entry 2
Hello! I read your comments on my previous entry and corrected what you told me. I made a one story option that you can unlock the boards from the outside. Something more that you could add is a vending machine on the roof top for drinks or even for wax. Wax could be added in the locker next to each board, or be purchased somewhere outside. Let me know what you think of my design. If there is anything you want me to add or change, please let me know. I am looking forward for your review.
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ptriantafillis
- il y a 2 mois
Thank you for your review!
1. Do you need space inside? I can create a version with less shortboards but the ability of people to be able to go inside, change and use lockers to leave their clothes and stuff.
2. Now as it is, it can fit 6 longboards up to 12' high and 9 shortboards up to 8' high.
I can add a few more shortboards by using the space under the roof that there is nothing there, or use that space as an indoor area. Whatever you prefer.
The place where I have written logo is too high for a 5' person to reach so I can't put more longboards there( only if it is for decoration purposes or if they use a latter) . The only way I could add 2 more longboards is by making the lockers a bit smaller. This would make it more difficult for the person to take the board in and out of the locker but you will have space for 8 longboards instead of 6.
I am looking forward for your reply so that I can start planning and designing.
Thanks- il y a 2 mois
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Titulaire du concours - il y a 2 mois
Your new design looks great.
1. I think another option where you have a changing room instead of stairs to the roof would be great. But no lockers cause people could store there clothes where the boards are.
2. The more boards the better, as long as they are reachable.- il y a 2 mois
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Titulaire du concours - il y a 2 mois
This looks great! A few thoughts for another iteration:
1. Would there be space to go inside still?
2. My main concern with this design is that I want more efficiency of storing boards. Can you show the next option without the space under the roof, and where you have the logo? How many boards, equally long and short, can we fit?- il y a 2 mois
