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Illustration 01.1 (BLACK LINE ART)

Good day~ Feedback please for enhancement. I used a solid black line art here. My other entry has a colored line art which makes the illustration have a softer appearance.

Proposition n°23 du concours Create illustrations (PSD) from pencil sketch - first piece, more to follow!
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  • ppoellnitz
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    Hi Nelrano, this is good colouring - the skin seems too bright to me and the texture is a little too plastic at times (because of highlights: face, crab, bottle) whilst other highlights seem well balanced (the bed, shirt). Do you have further references apart from your portfolio - like characters you have drawn?

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    1. NELRANO
      NELRANO
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      ...and f you're interested to see the edited version of my submission based on your feedback, here's the link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/1jbom0eh492ji4c/Contest_01_03.png?dl=0

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    2. NELRANO
      NELRANO
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      Thank you for the feedback! Good thing the layers on my .PSD file are still separated so I can disable the highlights layer or change the blending more. I'm sorry if I didn't quite get your color palette but if perse I get the chance to work with you and give me samples to the color palette you prefer, I can do better hopefully.

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