Thank you for your entry Nikhil. I would like to ask you, where are you asking the visitor to focus on in the image? The text, the arrows, the trellis logo ?
When we design ads, and visual media, we try and direct the attention of the customer to different parts primarily by means of the color we use, the size of things, and by things moving. In this image there isn't anything moving, but there are colors and things of differrent sizes. Since there are many things of similar size, we try and direct attention by color.
Thus, I request you try again, by focusing on changing the colors of the text, and fixing the arrows, so it is the actual arrow we are using (take it from the pdf files), and not the one you drew. I think you will find a much better result than what you have right now. Thank you for your entry.